choke

ofnegativity · 22nd January 2004, 04:44 PM

sympathetically embrace the idea,
hiding beneath these concrete wounds and smoke filled bandages. a chokehold search for an open space.analytically sever all links with the history.islands that float further from origin.bulilding the end from the remnints of psyche***.still a picture to stare at- as the fortune fades,these six serrated words cut deep into the blueprint.change this path with no marked diversion.left travelling alone with no direction.no road to follow or track to retreat.cast a line and find the end.wherever we lay our waste is where we'll lay and waste alone****

curlupanddie · 29th January 2004, 12:45 AM

Kool, i dont understand it, maybe im not poetic or something, but what is the poem about exactly? whatever it is, i like it!

matt · 4th February 2004, 02:09 PM

thanks, i wish i was dead now..
thanks again.

owenboskoala · 21st February 2004, 10:28 AM

its about how ahins baws and were all gonna die pissed off and lonely,hah

the way humans always fuk the life up haha

22nd January 2004, 04:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
ofnegativity Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: the crown Posts: 11	choke sympathetically embrace the idea, hiding beneath these concrete wounds and smoke filled bandages. a chokehold search for an open space.analytically sever all links with the history.islands that float further from origin.bulilding the end from the remnints of psyche*.still a picture to stare at- as the fortune fades,these six serrated words cut deep into the blueprint.change this path with no marked diversion.left travelling alone with no direction.no road to follow or track to retreat.cast a line and find the end.wherever we lay our waste is where we'll lay and waste alone**

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29th January 2004, 12:45 AM	#2 (permalink)
curlupanddie Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Dundee, Scotland Posts: 1,233 Band: Sunset Squad (Dundee), We Shall Be Blessed (Aberdeen)	Kool, i dont understand it, maybe im not poetic or something, but what is the poem about exactly? whatever it is, i like it!

4th February 2004, 02:09 PM	#3 (permalink)
matt Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Perth Posts: 3,403	thanks, i wish i was dead now.. thanks again.

21st February 2004, 10:28 AM	#4 (permalink)
owenboskoala Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Dundee Posts: 1,828 Band: Archives, Kaput.	its about how ahins baws and were all gonna die pissed off and lonely,hah the way humans always fuk the life up haha