Whispering Lettuce

Johnny · 18th February 2004, 11:25 PM

This is one I wrote when I was going into a McDonalds.
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My heart, sadly, longing, like a 500 volt sausage,
Begging for more, more than I can give,
Try to fill the void, no. no it can't be done.
Need. Need. Need... and want as well.....

A saviour, a king, from the earth..
A hero, a god, from the sky..
The humble lettuce, it brings me hope,
and the hope the humble lettuce brings me, brings me love,
and I give that love......

... to you....

What do you think? It has a lot of personal feelings and emotions in it so please give constructive critisism and don't slag it.

gord · 18th February 2004, 11:53 PM

Oscar Wilde aint got nothin' on you boy

18th February 2004, 11:25 PM	#1 (permalink)
Johnny is latin for sexy. Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Glenrothes Posts: 5,137 Band: Aces High	Whispering Lettuce This is one I wrote when I was going into a McDonalds. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My heart, sadly, longing, like a 500 volt sausage, Begging for more, more than I can give, Try to fill the void, no. no it can't be done. Need. Need. Need... and want as well..... A saviour, a king, from the earth.. A hero, a god, from the sky.. The humble lettuce, it brings me hope, and the hope the humble lettuce brings me, brings me love, and I give that love...... ... to you.... What do you think? It has a lot of personal feelings and emotions in it so please give constructive critisism and don't slag it.

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18th February 2004, 11:53 PM	#2 (permalink)
gord of the rings Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Dundee Posts: 2,728	Oscar Wilde aint got nothin' on you boy