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2nd April 2004, 11:13 AM
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Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Dundee, Scotland
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What You Think?
This aint exactly a poem, its a song i wrote, but you know.. songs are just poetry practically. So can you tell me what you think of it?
MY LIBERATOR BRIDGE: I was lost But you found me Hiding from life Transparent to reality VERSE 1: My thoughts were unclear Emotions troubled from torment Deveived by humanity Misled by the world Lies mixed with truth Happiness mixed with pain How was this possible? BRIDGE: I was lost But you found me Hiding from life Transparent to reality CHORUS: This wounded world Captured my life Forever in confinement Blinded by the world But you set my soul free You are my liberator VERSE 2: I know im still young but before i met you my life was falling apart Your voice chased away My fears that once existed No longer living in regret You saved me BRIDGE: I was lost But you found me Hiding from life Transparent to reality CHORUS: This wounded world Captured my life Forever in confinement Blinded by the world But you set my soul free You are my liberator You are my liberator |
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